I wish…
I could be the hands to touch you all the time.
I wish I could be your smiles to glow on your face
All the time.
I wish I could be your soul to exist with you all the time, and I wish
I could be your memory to stick to your brain
All the time and I wish I could be
your feelings to live in your heart
All the time.
I wish…
I could be your body
To be with you
For the rest of your life.
By Pakiza
Very moving poem about love. Excellent job, keep up the good work.
Dear Pakiza,
When I first read your peom it reminded me alot of my loved ones that have died. This peom was excellent it touched my heart alot. I just want to tell you to keep up the good work.
Dear Pakiza,
Your poem was extremely moving and heartfelt. Living in a culture with many restrictions can be challenging, and I can understand your burden. My parents are from India and their beliefs are different from Americans. I am not allowed to talk to men or hug them in front of other Indians even if they are merely friends. Your poem was moving and I appreciate the time you took to get your story out.
This poem embodies love for me. Thank you so much for that.
Hi Pakiza,
How beautifully you write. Your words flow together straight from the heart and demonstrate the strength of your longing. Please, write another to share with us.