Only your warm hug gives me peace
My sorrows are forgotten
When I am dispirited
Saying your name fills me with delight
If I could not talk to you
My heart might stop
You are my beginning
And the best part of my life
When we talk
My pains go away
Without you I am unsure
With you beside me
I become mighty
If you cry
Your tears fill my eyes
Your laugh fills my heart with love
You make me complete
If you are not by my side
I will not be successful
If you do not hold my hand
I will not become myself
If you do not accompany me
I become depressed
If you turn away your face
When I feel your soft hand in mine
I feel relief
My world depends on you
My heart is devoted to you
After God, you are my only protector
By Sitara B.
ISAF photo/ USAF SrA Alexandra Hoachlander
Sitara,
This is lovely. Your writing allows the reader to imagine who the “you” is, and that’s a great way to invite the reader into your poem. We have all felt this way at some time in our lives.
Take good care of yourself,
Linda
My Dear Sirara,
Once again your fabulous poem makes me to spent an happy day. so so beautiful words you have raised in this poems which makes to fall in love..
.I will not be successful
If you do not hold my hand
I will not become myself
If you do not accompany me
Farhanges.