Be always beautiful
like rain
Because when rain rains it cleans all
Trees swing with happiness
Ocean starts its wavy dance
Earth puts on its green dress
A drop of you makes a rose bloom
And clouds …
Clouds drop their precious tears
Covering tears on earth
Oh, yummy rain!
I like your swell splash
You make humans smile
By Farida Fa, age 16
Photo by Phil Borges.
Your poem made me smile.
So delicate and gorgeous…you’re giving so much beauty to us with so few words. Thank you. Stacy
I love the line, “clouds drop their precious tears” There is a feeling of admiration and warmth here that “makes humans smile” Thank you for sharing your words!
Lisa
Dear Lisa,
Thanks at all from your reading.
Farida
Dear Lisa,
Thanks at all from your reading.
Farida
Dear Lisa ,
Thanks at all from your reading,
Dear Stacy,
Welcome!!! 🙂
I never knew that ,my poem can give smile on the lips of a person. So, I am happy now I can gift smile.
Farida
I like the simplicity of your poem Farida. I hope you will continue to write poetry like this. Susan P.
I always like to continue writing and I never stop it. It gives me happy.
Farida 🙂
Dear Farida,
I love the first lines of your poem:
“Be always beautiful
like rain”
And I also like how you use language that takes risks, and dares to be different. For example, I think your line “Oh, yummy rain!” is brilliant. I can see you sticking out your tongue to taste the fresh rain water. I also like the sound of the phrase “swell splash.”
I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry!
Thank you,
Suzanne
“Oh, yummy rain!”
Farida, You have magic with your words!!
I live in a place where it rains a lot–the Pacific Northwest of US. Many people complain about our rain, but to me it is so beautiful. But I could never have expressed it as beautifully as you have in your lovely peom.
You have made me happy. Please keep writing.
Kathy
My feelings are very similar to Kathy … I love your expression “yummy rain”. I also come from a part of the UK where it rains a lot but I still love the rain … I can watch it, listen to it and walk in it.